Second prize in Scripts, Ninth Annual Humanities and Sciences Writing Contest
INT. WALK-IN CLOSET--EARLY MORNING
The air is still.
Hundreds of clothing items hoard 3/4ths of the walls. A mirror covers the remaining 1/4th. In front of the mirror lies a deteriorating box with a faded, white navy uniform inside.
APRIL (18) sits next to the box, examining it.
April's eyes study the uniform. Her hand grazes on its stains and wear. She gracefully picks it up by the sleeves, revealing a button up shirt with the collar down.
The tag on the neckline presents: ARTHUR SIMON.
Suddenly, April's head swings toward the doorway. Footstep’s creek louder and louder. LAUREN (49) walks in, wearing a stained "Royal Bakery" shirt and holding a laundry basket.
April, with her mouth struck open, stares at Lauren.
Lauren
April—
Lauren places the laundry basket down.
Lauren
Again? You can't just go around touching Grandpa's things.
Lauren takes the uniform from April and hesitantly folds it. She's barely touching it, revolted by the dirty stains.
Lauren places the lid on the box, and stares at the short piece of pink twine that's tied to it; it's jagged and cut.
She puts it back on the shelf, ignoring the twine.
Lauren rubs her hands on the side of her pants, then grabs a black "Royal Bakery" shirt from the laundry basket. She holds it up, slightly wiggling the shirt.
Lauren
So... you ready? April nods, forcing a smile. Lauren tosses the shirt to her.
Lauren
Bring that with you.
April
Can't you just have it at the shop for me?
Lauren
You coming right from school is already cutting it close, I'm not wasting any time today.
Lauren walks towards a jacket on a hanger and puts it on.
Lauren
Alright, I'll see you later!
Lauren walks out.
April, still sitting on the floor, looks at her reflection. She stands up and leaves with the "Royal Bakery" shirt clenched in her fist, hanging low.
INT. APRIL'S ROOM -- CONTINUOUS
April walks into her bedroom and stuffs the shirt in her backpack. Her phone, sitting on her bed, starts ringing.
April
(picking up the phone) Hello?
Jennifer
(from the phone)
Hi, I'm looking for April Thomas?
April
(into phone) Yes, that's me.
April zips her backpack up.
Jennifer
(from the phone)
This is Jennifer Mills from the United States Naval Recruitment Office in Freehold. You had an appointment to take your Aptitude Battery Test this coming Monday, but due to the impending storm tomorrow we'll be extending our weekend closure.
April
(into phone) Oh, okay.
April holds the phone between her shoulder and ear as she slides her jacket on.
Jennifer
(from the phone)
However, we had a cancellation if you'd like to come in today. If not, our next available date would be after the new year, January 3RD.
April looks at today’s date on her calendar, December 2ND, labeled "Grand Reopening.”
April
(into phone) Um...
Jennifer
(from the phone)
It's at 3:15, do you want it?
April's eyes move down and lock on a photo; it's of her younger self with her grandfather.
April
(into phone)
--Yes, I'll be there.
Jennifer
(from the phone)
Great, I'll put you in. See you then.
April hangs up, throws her backpack on, and rushes out.
INT. SIMON'S BAKERY -- LATER
The bakery is studded with decorations. A banner labeled “SIMON'S BAKERY, GRAND RE- OPENING!” hangs behind the counter.
A bell rings as April's father, ZACHARY (50), enters.
Jennifer
Look what was just delivered.
Zachary is holding a box and places it on the counter. He reaches inside and pulls out a sparkling "Simon's Bakery" t-shirt. Lauren is beaming.
Lauren
These look amazing!
Jennifer
I know, I wasn't expecting to get them until tomorrow.
Lauren
Well now we can wear these for pictures, April should be here soon.
Lauren happily stares at the new shirts.
INT. APRIL'S CAR -- AFTERNOON
April's driving, and glances at the time on her dashboard: 3:09 PM
She pulls into a parking spot, and stares at the storefront labeled "ARMED FORCES CAREER CENTER".
April takes a scrunchy off her wrist and ties her hair back. She then grabs her backpack and exits her car.
INT. SIMON'S BAKERY -- LATE AFTERNOON
Lauren is at the counter wearing the crisp new bakery shirt. She walks towards the front door and flips the OPEN sign to CLOSED.
A REPORTER (26) with a pen & paper approaches the door.
Reporter
(through the door)
Tri-town news, is this a good time?
Lauren nods and waves him inside.
Lauren
(shouting) Zachary!
Reporter
So, congratulations on the grand re-opening, can you tell me about it?
Lauren
Well, this bakery used to be a part of the Royal Bakery chain— Zachary walks towards Lauren, also wearing the new bakery shirt.
Lauren
--and my father started working here when he finished his service from
the Navy. He really loved it and worked his way up to manager.
Zachary
But it was always his dream to have his own family bakery.
Reporter
Was this place a big part of your childhood?
Lauren
Not exactly. My mom and I followed my dad around during his service, so I didn't start here till I was 16.
Zachary
And I started out as a part-time employee! Then I ended up marrying the boss's daughter.
Lauren
April has been helping out since she could walk—
Reporter
(looking around) April...?
EXT. SIMON'S BAKERY -- CONTINUOUS
April is sitting in her car. She picks up her phone: 7 missed calls from MOM. The time on her phone says: 5:04 PM
She takes her shirt off and pushes it into her backpack. Then she takes out the "Royal Bakery" shirt and puts it on.
April pulls her sun visor down and opens her mirror; she rushes to unravel her hair. Next to the mirror is an "In Loving Memory of Arthur Simon" card.
A manila folder lies flat on the passenger seat. Pamphlets labeled, "How to pass the ASVAB" are spilling out of it. April opens her bag wide and forcefully stuffs it inside.
April grabs her backpack and slams the car door shut.
INT. SIMON'S BAKERY -- CONTINUOUS
Lauren
(to the Reporter)
My father was... very special. I know everyone says that about their Dad but… he really was loved by everyone. So, when he passed, we decided to scrape together everything we had and buy the shop—
A bell rings. Lauren’s eyes look over at the door. April walks in, wearing the old bakery shirt.
Lauren (O.S.)
--We couldn't do it in his lifetime but... what better way to honor his memory.
April passes a table with a red ribbon cut into two, then approaches the counter, putting her keys and backpack down.
Zachary (O.S.)
He served for over 25 years and deserved for this place to be named after him.
April joins the family. Lauren grabs her shoulders, holding her like a trophy.
Lauren
And this is April, our girl. She's been making cookies since she was 6.
Reporter
April! Tell me, what's your go-to treat here?
April
(startled)
Oh-uh, definitely our cupcakes! We make them fresh daily, and we offer uh- different flavors each week.
Reporter
Noted, thank you!
The Reporter finishes writing in his notebook.
Reporter
Alrighty, you can find this on our website next week. Have a good one!
The Reporter exits. Lauren then turns to April.
Lauren
(worried) Are you alright?
April
yeah- I'm sorry.
Lauren
Where were you?
April gathers her thoughts.
April
You know how Grandpa always said that his biggest regret wasn't staying in the Navy longer...
Lauren
(rolling eyes) Yes—
April
And how, when his ship docked for the last time, he didn't want to get off?
Lauren
--yes?
April
Well-- I—
Lauren
What does that have to do with today?
April
I-- Sorry I lost track of time.
Lauren
This is what Grandpa wanted, April! I was expecting you to be here, how could you not want t—
April
--I did want to be here!
Lauren
(growing angry)
Do you even know how hard it was without you here?
April
No—
Lauren
Do you know what it was like having every customer ask about you?
April is conjuring up words to say. Her mother’s voice grows louder.
Lauren
All I asked was for you to be here.
April
I'm here now—
Lauren
--and what about my calls? For God's sake April all you had to do was show up!
April grabs her keys from the counter and storms out. Lauren stares at the door, then leans against the counter, extinguishing her flames.
Zachary gently puts his hand on her back.
Zachary
You okay?
Lauren lets out a large sigh.
Lauren
I'm going to start cleaning.
Lauren walks away, but trips on April's backpack. She rolls her eyes and kicks the bag away.
Zachary stares at April's backpack, her belongings now spilled out at his feet. A manila folder prominently sticks out with papers falling out. He examines the material.
INT. APRIL'S ROOM -- NIGHT
April is digging through her drawer and pulls out a flash drive. She plugs it into her computer and opens the file. Suddenly, footage of navy sailors dance on the screen.
April is mesmerized.
BEGIN FLASHBACK:
INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY
A YOUNG APRIL (7) sits on a couch with her legs dangling.
ARTHUR (70) is on his knees, fiddling with the box TV. Suddenly, the blue error screen starts playing an old film.
Arthur
There we go!
Arthur slowly stands up. He sits aside Young April.
Arthur
So those are my buddies right there, and… that's me!
Young April
(amazed) Wow.
Young April stands up and makes a superhero stance.
Young April
I'm going to be a sailor just like you Grandpa!
Arthur
You think you're cut out for it? Endless adventure and traveling? But still serving your country?
Young April spins in circles out of excitement.
Young April
Oh yeah, I can do it!
Arthur
Alright my future sailor, come sit so we can watch the rest.
Young April sits down next to Arthur with a smile.
END FLASHBACK
KNOCK. KNOCK.
April jolts, closing out of the video.
April
It's open.
Zachary opens the door holding April's backpack.
Zachary
I think you might need this for your homework.
April
Oh, thanks.
Zachary, still in the doorway, takes his other hand out from his back, revealing the manila folder.
Zachary
You also want to tell me about this?
April
I can explain—
Zachary
I don't think I'm the one you have to explain it to.
April
Did you show this to her?
Zachary
No... you should.
Zachary approaches her. April shakes her head and looks back at her computer. Zachary puts the backpack down and sits on her bed.
Zachary
I didn't know you were this serious about it.
April continues to look away.
Zachary
Look I- I want you to have options and follow your heart, but your mom is so head-over-heels with this bakery
I think she's blind to the idea of you pursuing anything else.
April finally faces her father. He hands her the folder.
Zachary
You can't keep this from her anymore.
April
I know, but she's not going to listen—
Zachary
Because you guys have been talking at each other, not to each other.
Zachary stands up and approaches the door.
Zachary
You are just as stubborn as she was.
April
Dad, do you think I'm doing the right thing?
Zachary
I'm always going to be on your side, but you have to figure that out yourself.
Zachary walks out. April stares at the folder.
INT. STAIRCASE -- NIGHT
April slowly walks down the stairs but stops to unravel her hair. The manila folder is clenched in her fist.
April closes her eyes and breathes.
INT. KITCHEN -- CONTINUOUS
Lauren is sitting in a yellow, ill-lit kitchen. She's hunching over her laptop, drinking stale coffee. April slowly enters the kitchen, walking towards Lauren. Lauren looks over from her computer.
Lauren
Hey Hun.
April sits down next to Lauren. She places the folder down and slides it towards her. Lauren breaks her focus.
Lauren
What is this?
April
I went to a recruiting offi- Lauren opens the folder, examining the material.
Lauren
Is this where you were after school?
April
...Yes. But mom just-ju-
Lauren
(shocked) April—
April
I've thought about this for so long, and I really want to do this.
Lauren is stumbling for words to say.
Lauren
(sincere)
I never told you what it was like—
April
Yes, you have.
Lauren
But not the time when we were in Iowa, or when we were in New York, and I had moments where I thought Grandma would be a widow.
April
I know, and I hear you—
Lauren
This is a decision that will affect your whole life—
April
So is the bakery.
BEAT.
APRIL
Grandpa spent so much of his time telling me about the adventures he went on and the obstacles he went through-
Lauren
It's not a vacation, April.
Silence.
April
Well, I failed the test anyway so maybe it's a sign...
Lauren
What test?
April starts to pile everything back into the folder
April
It's an entrance exam, if you pass, you're eligible to enlist.
BEAT.
April stands up holding the folder, but Lauren grabs her wrist, sitting her back down.
Lauren
So, you're just going to give up after one try--? Did you pass your driver's test the first time?
April
That's different...
Lauren
But who stayed with you all night outside the high school trying to perfect your parallel parking?
April
You.
Lauren
Look at me.
April stares into her mother's eyes.
Lauren
We don't give up... ever.
April nods, realizing she's right.
Lauren
Where's my daughter that refused to let anyone help her when she was learning to frost a cupcake, hm? Or when you insisted on taking the training wheels off your bike?
April
I know where I get it from.
April laughs with her mother, a smile finally emerging from their faces. BEAT.
April points at her mother's mug.
April
Is that coffee from this morning?
April gets up and walks to the coffee maker.
Lauren
Oh, yeah. It is.
April
I'll make a fresh pot for you.
April empties the remaining liquid from the coffee pot into the sink, then putting it back under the machine.
Lauren
Oh, April that's okay re—
April
Are you planning on going to bed anytime soon?
Lauren smirks, knowing she's right. Lauren ponders, then exits the room.
INT. WALK-IN CLOSET -- CONTINUOUS
Lauren turns on the light; it echo’s through the small room.
Underneath a pair of shoes sits a shoe box. Lauren moves the shoes and opens the box.
Old notes, pictures, and letters are inside. She pulls out a small card with a jagged, pink piece of twine attached. The card, in shaky handwriting, says:
To my sailor, April, here’s mine until you get your own. Love, Grandpa.
Lauren fiddles with the paper in her fingers. She then looks up at the old box on the shelf where her father's uniform is.
Lauren takes the box down.
She takes the pink twine from the card and reties it to the matching pink piece attached to the box.
She whisks out of her closet, holding the box tight.
THE END
Annie Fleisch's script won second prize in the Ninth Annual Humanities and Sciences Writing Contest. Annie is a sophomore majoring in Film Production at the School of Visual Arts. She was born and raised in central New Jersey and recently filmed her script Sailor there.